Sludge January

Hey Team,

I'm sending about 20 pages of Sludge. It takes up from where the last installment ended with Sludge in the Rocky Mountains. He's hiding in the parking lot outside a store in North Fork, Idaho. He's on the run after escaping from Mathew's compound. All the usual questions apply. I also feel like it's kind of bloated. Any tips on shortening, tightening and getting rid of anything not needed would be appreciated. Also, how can I up the tension and keep it exciting and enjoyable to read?

Thanks,
Alan