War and Albert

I have two shorter pieces. One is a new piece that's 12 pages long. I wrote the first three pages of it for a Hamline residency, which Andy has read. I'm finally getting around to doing some more work on it. The other piece is the first five pages from Albert No-name. It's a different scene and it's in first person.

On the war story I'd like to know where you think this story is going or where you think would be a cool way for it to go. Also, is there potential for a 200 page book.

On Albert I'm mostly interested in knowing how you feel about the first person approach.

As always, any other comments you have are very much apprieciated.

I'll email them to you,

Thanks,
Alan