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Sunday, September 1, 2013

A Few Pages of Simon

For those of you familiar with Simon's story, this scene is (chronologically) first. It's a lead-in to the kitchen scene with Mom, in which they discuss the mysterious RV by the park.  But this chapter will actually be one of the last in the novel (if used at all). Darn disjointed sequence of events.

Carolyn, you might be a little lost, but that's okay. I'm curious how this works standing alone, anyway (without any knowledge of these characters, their histories, or what's to come for them). 

I did this as a free-write, trying to delve deeper into Simon's history and psyche.  Any and all feedback is appreciated.

Write on!

Ri