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Thursday, October 17, 2013

Sludge

Well group,

This is another installment of Sludge. The first four pages are a revised beginning. It could start in at least three different places. Tell me what you think about where you think is the best place.

The rest is a continuation of what you've already read. Glade, who is now called Sludge by his friends, has escaped from the compound. He is at the hospital where a nice family took him. He has negotiated for some clothes and money with the doctor. Now he is waiting in a hospital room for the doctor to get 20 more dollars.

Carolyn, I'll also send you the first 84 pages to read if you feel so inclined.

Thanks,
Alan