Writing that kicks your ass
Showing posts with label Group A. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Group A. Show all posts
Saturday, October 23, 2010
Albert No-name
Here's a substantial rewrite of Albert No-name. I feel like the first version had a lot of issues. I'm interested in knowing what you think of the sequence of events, amount of info. given, general readability and whatever else catches your eye or you think needs something. Basically what works and what doesn't.
Sunday, September 19, 2010
The Dog and His Boy
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