Writing that kicks your ass

Showing posts with label Group A. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Group A. Show all posts

Saturday, October 23, 2010

Albert No-name

Here's a substantial rewrite of Albert No-name. I feel like the first version had a lot of issues. I'm interested in knowing what you think of the sequence of events, amount of info. given, general readability and whatever else catches your eye or you think needs something. Basically what works and what doesn't.

Sunday, September 19, 2010

The Dog and His Boy


I have posted the most recent pages via email. Tramp is cleverly leading Colin.......well, that is what I want the reader to think. Let me know if it is working.

Group A

Group A Schedule

Sept 19 - Bill
Oct 3 - Chris
Oct 17 - Alan
Oct 31 - David


Very good.