A swashbuckling adventure for your appraisal. Looking forward to your constructive comments. Thanks gang!
Sunday, March 30, 2014
Sunday, March 9, 2014
Jody, Jody, Silver
Hi all,
Just emailed you my short story"Jody, Jody, Silver" for some feedback. What works for you? What doesn't? Could the ending do more? Could the title do more?
Thanks!!!
Just emailed you my short story"Jody, Jody, Silver" for some feedback. What works for you? What doesn't? Could the ending do more? Could the title do more?
Thanks!!!
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