Hello, fellows!
I've emailed you some of The Ghoul, this section from a new draft. Dayne Carmichael (his name in former drafts was Nick Bannon Somethingorother) has, in the first few chapters, come to a dead end in his search for his mother's killer.
In this chapter, the search is very much back on...
Please let me know what's working, what isn't, what possibilities are here, what's confusing/could be clearer, and what your Spidey-storytelling sense is telling you about how this story's going!
Thank you, guys!!!
Andy
I've emailed you some of The Ghoul, this section from a new draft. Dayne Carmichael (his name in former drafts was Nick Bannon Somethingorother) has, in the first few chapters, come to a dead end in his search for his mother's killer.
In this chapter, the search is very much back on...
Please let me know what's working, what isn't, what possibilities are here, what's confusing/could be clearer, and what your Spidey-storytelling sense is telling you about how this story's going!
Thank you, guys!!!
Andy
