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Sunday, September 4, 2011

Riley's Rest

This is late, but Riley's work needs further comments.

Superb writing. Great story. Can't get a better combination.

With a few hints about Meagan, could be a complete short story.

But also very worthy of a YA? novel. Almost adult with a few adjustments.

The rabbit - girl // death analogy is aching for development.

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