I am sending the manuscript as it exists today. The last piece sent in November was 4 chapters and 16 pages. This is the revised 4 and 13 more, short, short chapters. Read what you have time for. If I persevere, I will finish in May.
The story is now focused on the search for Tramp's sister. Unknown to Tramp, she may have been living only a few blocks away, but now has disappeared.
I am looking for responses to the number of characters and their importance to the story.