Well group,
This is another installment of Sludge. The first four pages are a revised beginning. It could start in at least three different places. Tell me what you think about where you think is the best place.
The rest is a continuation of what you've already read. Glade, who is now called Sludge by his friends, has escaped from the compound. He is at the hospital where a nice family took him. He has negotiated for some clothes and money with the doctor. Now he is waiting in a hospital room for the doctor to get 20 more dollars.
Carolyn, I'll also send you the first 84 pages to read if you feel so inclined.
Thanks,
Alan
Writing that kicks your ass
Thursday, October 17, 2013
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